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I walked between the lines and felt the sorrow of your yesterday I saw every tear in the shadows of your memory and the loathsome battle of your facade Empty that barrel of travesties upon my bludgeoned soul pierced to understand forced to emerge a victor if for no other purpose than empathy I am at your feet if you need a place to walk between the lines to release the toxins of your shadows Clear your brow upon my days it is where I am upon the crevices of my personal road
Ooo. This is powerful! Very descriptive. Thanks for sharing & please continue writing. :*)
Thank you so much, glad you liked it! I don’t think there’s any stopping me so you don’t have to worry lol Thanks again :)
Wonderful imagery… Enjoyed it immensely… ;)
Thanks so much!
wow
thank you :)
Not sure if I am reading this right…but empathy sure sounds painful!
lol well I suppose it depends on the person or experience that is triggering the empathy;)
Roads have to undergo construction; sometimes, detours have to be made. A beautiful poem and meaningful. For those who have learned well how to walk a straight line. A nice companion piece to “Boundaries”. I wonder sometimes if the lines walked between also indicate the boundaries in some way?
Well it could be a companion piece, coming from two contrary relationships. Very intriguing way to look at it, thank you ;)
There is beauty in words….it’s certainly easy to find in your words.
Well thank you :) And good morning to you too ;)
Good morning! I’m off to face the blizzard and slowly make my way to work. Have a great Romantic Monday!
Don’t let anymore snow come down here, I’m ready for Spring!
“I saw every tear in the shadows of your memory”
Amazing!
Thank you, love being cited ;)
Great poem! Powerful.
Thanks so much!