where are you? there is an immensity of things to be said inert aspects of my sights my insights and spirit exposed for your personal worth while my availability becomes remote in self defense I want you to see me but you never look my way
“See”
18 Monday Feb 2013
Posted in POETRY
Wow….we’ve all had that feeling. Beautifully said.
Thank you so much :)
So short in letter, word, and title. Still little else need be said that has not already been made abundantly clear. This poem exhibits your talent for dissolving that which is complicated into something which is beautiful in its simplicity. Great poem.
Thank you so much, a simple way to describe a sort of intense pining lol. Your compliments just make me speechless :)
Gaze my friend – with all intensity and she’ll feel your sight vibrations, she’ll turn — and she’ll smile.
Very true, this is real, I actually wrote a poem on kind of a relevant idea, it’s called “Notice” Thanks so much for commenting!
I love how you work your words awesome blog
Thanks so much, very flattering way to put it, working my words, that’s awesome thank you!